The Promise
He said,
as you walk the beach
on a lacklustre day
find the footprints I left behind
stop mid-stride
You’ll find a smile
under the shells
my name, my eyes
my commitment
a dawn bird
In response to Word of the Day Challenge – Lacklustre
How wonderful!
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Thank you Punam. 🙂
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You are welcome!
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I like that it can read variably, and carries that liminal feeling of swoon.
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Ah! your read your more beautiful, than my write! 🙂
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Well that is very gracious, thank you. 🙂
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Oh! you made sense of my incoherent response! lol You’re very welcome. 🙂
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Lol
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🙂
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